[review] [YDB] Check "Added static credentials for deploy ydb on premises" translate

3 files changed, 30 insertions, 30 deletions

diff --git a/ydb/docs/en/core/_includes/storage-device-requirements.md b/ydb/docs/en/core/_includes/storage-device-requirements.md
index 91fc6ada03..06cd0192b2 100644
--- a/ydb/docs/en/core/_includes/storage-device-requirements.md
+++ b/ydb/docs/en/core/_includes/storage-device-requirements.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-For YDB to work efficiently, we recommend using physical (not virtual) disks larger than 800 GB as block devices.
+For {{ ydb-short-name }} to work efficiently, we recommend using physical (not virtual) disks larger than 800 GB as block devices.
 
-The minimum disk size must be at least 80 GB, otherwise the node won't be able to use the block store volume. Correct and uninterrupted operation with minimum-size disks is not guaranteed. We recommend using such disks exclusively for informational purposes.
+The minimum disk size is 80 GB, otherwise the {{ ydb-short-name }} node won't be able to use the device. Correct and uninterrupted operation with minimum-size disks is not guaranteed. We recommend using such disks exclusively for informational purposes.
 
 {% note warning %}
 
diff --git a/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/_includes/prepare-configs.md b/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/_includes/prepare-configs.md
index 7b91b7792b..fe4aaa3d0a 100644
--- a/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/_includes/prepare-configs.md
+++ b/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/_includes/prepare-configs.md
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ Prepare a configuration file for {{ ydb-short-name }}:
    * [mirror-3dc](https://github.com/ydb-platform/ydb/blob/main/ydb/deploy/yaml_config_examples/mirror-3dc-9-nodes.yaml): For a cross-data center cluster consisting of 9 nodes.
    * [mirror-3dc-3nodes](https://github.com/ydb-platform/ydb/blob/main/ydb/deploy/yaml_config_examples/mirror-3dc-3-nodes.yaml): For a cross-data center cluster consisting of 3 nodes.
 
-1. In the `host_configs` section, specify all disks and their types on each cluster node. Possible disk types are:
-   * ROT: rotational, HDD devices.
-   * SSD: SSD or NVMe devices.
+1. In the `host_configs` section, specify all disks and their types on each cluster node. Possible disk types:
+   * ROT: Rotational, HDD.
+   * SSD: SSD or NVMe.
 
    ```json
    host_configs:
@@ -42,24 +42,24 @@ Prepare a configuration file for {{ ydb-short-name }}:
        rack: '1'
    ```
 
-1. Enable user authentication (optional). 
+1. Enable user authentication (optional).
 
-    If you plan to use the authentication and authorization capabilities in the {{ ydb-short-name }} cluster being created, add the following additional parameters to the `domains_config` section:
+   If you plan to use authentication and user access differentiation features in the {{ ydb-short-name }} cluster, add the following parameters to the `domains_config` section:
 
-    ```json
-    domains_config:
-      security_config:
-        enforce_user_token_requirement: true
-        monitoring_allowed_sids:
-        - "root"
-        - "ADMINS"
-        - "DATABASE-ADMINS"
-        administration_allowed_sids:
-        - "root"
-        - "ADMINS"
-        - "DATABASE-ADMINS"
-        viewer_allowed_sids:
-        - "root"
-        - "ADMINS"
-        - "DATABASE-ADMINS"
-    ```
+   ```json
+   domains_config:
+     security_config:
+       enforce_user_token_requirement: true
+       monitoring_allowed_sids:
+       - "root"
+       - "ADMINS"
+       - "DATABASE-ADMINS"
+       administration_allowed_sids:
+       - "root"
+       - "ADMINS"
+       - "DATABASE-ADMINS"
+       viewer_allowed_sids:
+       - "root"
+       - "ADMINS"
+       - "DATABASE-ADMINS"
+   ```
diff --git a/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/deploy-ydb-on-premises.md b/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/deploy-ydb-on-premises.md
index d8d9871eb4..c1b755f52b 100644
--- a/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/deploy-ydb-on-premises.md
+++ b/ydb/docs/en/core/deploy/manual/deploy-ydb-on-premises.md
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 # Deploying a {{ ydb-short-name }} cluster on virtual or bare-metal servers
 
-This document describes how to deploy a multi-tenant {{ ydb-short-name }} cluster on several bare-metal or virtual servers.
+This document describes how to deploy a multi-tenant {{ ydb-short-name }} cluster on multiple bare-metal or virtual servers.
 
 ## Before you begin {#before-start}
 
 ### Prerequisites {#requirements}
 
-Make sure you have SSH access to all servers. This is required to install artifacts and run the {{ ydb-short-name }} binary. The network configuration must allow TCP connections on the following ports (by default):
+Make sure you have SSH access to all servers. This is required to install artifacts and run the {{ ydb-short-name }} executable. The network configuration must allow TCP connections on the following ports (by default):
 
 * 2135, 2136: GRPC for client-cluster interaction.
 * 19001, 19002: Interconnect for intra-cluster node interaction.
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ We don't recommend storing data on disks used by other processes (including the
    sudo chown -R ydb:ydb /opt/ydb
    ```
 
-1. Copy the binary file, and libraries to the appropriate directories:
+1. Copy the executable and libraries to the appropriate directories:
 
    ```bash
    sudo cp -iR ydbd-stable-linux-amd64/bin /opt/ydb/
@@ -102,13 +102,13 @@ We don't recommend storing data on disks used by other processes (including the
 
 - Unprotected mode
 
-   In the unprotected mode, traffic between cluster nodes and between client and cluster uses  unencrypted connections. Use this mode for testing purposes only.
+   In unprotected mode, traffic between cluster nodes and between the client and cluster uses an unencrypted connection. Use this mode for testing purposes.
 
    {% include [prepare-configs.md](_includes/prepare-configs.md) %}
 
 - Protected mode
 
-   In the protected mode, traffic between cluster nodes and between the client and cluster is encrypted using the TLS protocol.
+   In protected mode, traffic between cluster nodes and between the client and cluster is encrypted using the TLS protocol.
 
    {% note info %}
 
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ We don't recommend storing data on disks used by other processes (including the
          sudo chmod 0750 /opt/ydb/certs
          ```
 
-      1. Copy the node certificates and keys to the installation directory:
+      1. Copy the certificates and node keys to the installation folder:
 
          ```bash
          sudo -u ydb cp certs/ca.crt certs/node.crt certs/node.key /opt/ydb/certs/